Does family shape identity? How? Why?
Intro: Who you are.
Who your family members are.
Why you are the way you are.
Paragraph 1: relationships with your family.
Manners
How you act around other people
Roll models
Why it can be positive
Paragraph 2: good or bad relationships with your family
Do you behave good or bad.
How you treat others
Conclusion: why its important
The way I am because of my family
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I have one question. Why do you only have three paragraphs when this essay is to be at least three pages long? Don't get me wrong, I like the content you decided on, but you have to increase the length of your paper. You could seperate some of those subjects into more sections and lengthen what you write on them. Make sure that each paragraph is at least five sentences long as well.
ReplyDeleteI agree that family shapes who you are and teaches you a lot. They teach us how to show respect and manners for others. We learn behavior from the people around us. As children when we see people we love doing things, we want to grow up and be just like them. Our family's show us right from wrong.
ReplyDeletehey i like how talk a lot about your family but in a positive way:) i can relate a lot on what you are going to write about. i know that you learn a lot as a person on your surroundings:) i know you will write a great essay!
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